Reading in between the lines
scanners of the almost senile
don’t care to remember the pain
while holographic youth read
every space a value and
inventory deleted and/or depleted
keeping count the cost a close
distance from her heart
while he stops
counting the birch shadows
on the road
already taken
I like this piece, it has great flow and transitions...I like the line about the birch shadows of the road not taken, it contrasts with the digital feel of the first half, with a more Robert-Frost country tone in the second half
ReplyDeleteI like this poem, I like the line don't care to remember the pain/ While holographic youth read ever space a value.......depleted. I do agree with Kelly it has a great flow.
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